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Postby SupremeRawal » Fri Dec 24, 2021 10:40 am

[b][b][b]Comment 1
Human beings need a challenge and space exploration is the biggest adventure of all.
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Comment 2
The greatest gain from space travel consists in the extension of our knowledge. In a hundred years this newly won knowledge will pay huge and unexpected dividends.
Wernher von Braun
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Comment 3
Space flights are merely an escape, a fleeing away from oneself, because it is easier to go to Mars or to the moon than it is to penetrate one’s own being.
Carl Jung
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Comment 4
We choose to go to the moon. We choose to go to the moon in this decade not because it is easy but because it is hard.
John F. Kennedy
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Comment 5
Whatever the benefits of space exploration, it is irresponsible to pursue them rather than facing the great dangers threatening humanity.

My essay

Challenges enhance our knowledge by widening our horizons of thinking to come up with a conclusion. As stated by von Braun, it will pay huge and unexpected dividends. Although challenges can be hard and frustrating, persevering and overcoming them can lead to success.

John F. Kennedy mentioned the decision to space travel in this decade was due to the complications and challenges not because it was simple. This allowed the brilliant astronomers, physicists, and engineers to think collaboratively and come up with a solution that would enable a successful space journey to the moon.

Space travel is without a doubt one of the biggest challenges to human society. The challenges that arise from space travel are huge. There are so many trials and errors conducted day by day in order to completely understand how space works. Without these challenges, problem-solving skills are limited and can be detrimental when an unexpected error emerges. Challenges enable us to prepare for the unexpected and come up with an alternative solution to resolve the situation.
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